Sorry about taking down almost all of the chapters from FanFiction.net
I was planning on using the first chapter for a contest-thing, but it got cancelled :(
It took awhile with tons of ink from both the printer and various pens plus help from various friends to fix most of the grammar/spelling errors. Basically it took forever to finish revising the first chapter. I hope everyone enjoys this revised chapter. I'm halfway through the 2nd chapter =_=;; and should have it posted on here next month along with ch 3. Its going to forever before I finish revising the chs but I believe that by then I should definitely have new (not revised but literally new) chapters by New Years... Fun thing about the Google Docs is you can comment on anything in the page.
